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a story i worked on,,, worked on it for 2 days its ok

Posted by CollectiveNRG - October 9th, 2020


I that prays


(Narration Mia)

In the year 4125 the world as we know it has eaten away its natural resources and the animals have all but been extinct, we survive off synthetic food

The earth has seen countless wars over the years and world wars, sadly most the world is no longer habitable

 I have come to complete realization there will be no more but I have lost all hope

I pray i find a way to save them us all

 

Adelaide citadel

(Helos)

It has been a whole year and I haven't slayed any men by my own hands it must be my new record

 

(Lucia)

I know you are so perfect my dear, but you have executed many men,

 

(Helos)

You know that’s the law and with the way things are

I say I’m doing a good job,

 

(Lucia)

That’s still a lot dear

I don’t think its counts as a record

 

(Helos)

I am the ruler the highest power of this world and it is my duty to carry out punishments

 

(Lucia)

I guess you are right

The people know their rightful place

And if it wasn’t for justice you would not be in power

 

(Ratful)

Helos there’s a tribe of man right outside the citadel doors

 

(Helos)

I’ll see to it

 

(Manfort)

You are a coward you sit ideally by and do nothing you ponder any fortune away on yourself you wouldn’t know how to run a world if your life depended on it

 

(Helos)

You know I have been a kind man for the last 3 years but I guess it’s time for me to break my record and kill you with my own hands

Do you except this one on one challenge, the sword will be the weapon of choice

 

(Manfort)

You’re on it will be the most honorable thing I could do is to bring you down

The time is at hand to see your demise,

 

(Helos)

Don’t count on it

 

(Fight starts) (Sword fight)

Manfort Fights honorable but is losing the fight

(Helos)

You know I’m only toying with you, I could of beat you from the start I just like to make things interesting

But it is now your time to die

Sslash Manfort gets sliced in half

 

(Helos)

Hmmhmmhm, you could of never take this world from me

 

(Helos gets Stabed in the back by Lucia)

 

(Helos)

What why how could this be I loved you

 

(Lucia)

You have always treated me like a 2nd grade citizen it was not love I never loved you, you could have been so much more if you spent more time on the people you wouldent understand and i am the one to bring more for them the one true rain begins toady

 

(Helos)

You wi..ll… fail.. an.d… fa…ll..

(Helos dies)

(Lucia) (announces)

We will now all work together and bring a new world one that will show dedication to science art literature and peace will prevail

Helos rain has ended we are well on our way to make a better world from now on and till the end of our time

 

(3 years later)

(Ratful)

The land is great your highness AI is running at full capacity we have discovered so much and the world is watching every movement, free in this world we are strong

 

(Lucia)

Yes but how is prototype 104 coming along 

 

(Ratful)

 We are just about to launch its first test

 

(Lucia)

Good its time

 

Test 1the whole world watching on their TV’s

(Lucia)

My people we have done so much in such a little amount of time you have been

Patient but now we are about to launch prototype 104 for the first time

104 is a time traveling device we might be able to save our world

But we will have to test it

 

(Ratful)

I will send this rock back in time to 1 minute ago and we will see what will happen

It might just work

 

(Warps the world but they retain their consciousness and are standing in different spots then before)

 

(Lucia)

It worked! But It will change everything as we know it there is no it way to save the world with this technology

We will have to find another way

 

(Kiel) (Watching TV)

Let’s take over the citadel use 104 send back all the information we can gather

we can change the fait of man for the better

Are you with me?

A Uprising is at hand time to take over the citadel and use 104

 

(A great war has taken place new technology has been used to fight not many survive Lucia does survive)

 

(Kiel)

It is time to send the information we have gathered to 2000 years ago go back in time save everything and make this world disappear And we will not be known

prototype 104 can only fit 2 people inside and I’m going to guard it no one will ruin the past its best they know nothing

 

(Keil turns on 104 and puts the USB of information in its core and defends 104

and then

Everything is

Gone)

 

(New fate ,,,,, bombom dif looking world)

 

(Alternate time line)

(Mia)

In the year 2152 the world as we know is a prosper world you could have anything you want we live strong for we are cyborgs We have an Entrical that allows us to maintain a fake world system that allows us to live over dramatic life style with no fear of death and the best fights take place there they are safe and fun

we have come to complete realization there will be no more inventions but have we lost all hope finding anything new

 and sophisticated AI work night and day on newest technology to bring us hope there will always be more to come,

And cybernetics are at the top of their field and upgrades are all the rage what can I say we have everything


(Dova)

You getting any upgrade done

 

(Mia)

Only the latest icore protact affiances, all the stuff a healthy girl needs

(Dova)

You have to start thinking with your head not all this mechanical nonsense it’s not natural

 

(Mia)

But i am at my greatest my brain function could not be higher

 

(Dova)

Ahhh that is nonsense

You’re starting to sound like a robot

 

(Mia)

You lucky I’m a nice girl i could ram your head into the ground

 

(Dova)

Lets go Entrical system now


(in the Entrical System)

(a fight between Mia and Dova is just about start)

Mia turns on her core power and reverts more power to her Nuro combustor,

Dova taunts and starts he’s attack he’s Movements are quick he will be hard to beat, Mia might not be as fast as Dova but she is armed with far more gadgets and upgrades, and shots bolts of lightning at Dova and is missing her target, Dova moves in close enough to swing he’s sword at Mia, Mia dodges out of the way of  Dova’s attack Dova is stunned with surprise! As Mia activates her ultra-pulse beam Erah, Dova has no were to move, Dova is knocked down and falls to the ground as he falls he’s sword has flung into the air Mia grabs Dova sword from mid-air and finishes off Dova with one final blow

(watching on screen commander chief Wilson icore secrtet research facilt alpha)

(Commander chief Wilson)

Hmmm she seems to show great potential,


(Dr. Fredaric)

And of heart i think i can use her she could be the one we have been looking for

I want you to set her mind free and give her the deluxe package i want you to see what she can do


(On tv)news cast)

I core has just reported that they will stop production of any new upgrades I repeat there will be no new upgrade going around I repeat no new upgrades


(Dova)

Yeah right as if that’s was only true then you would stop kicking my ass


(Mia)

It can’t be no new upgrades what about the AI set ups and what they have achieved,

What’s going on the they must be lying

 

(Jin)

Hello there, I see you are all sorts ‘of beauty and I see you love upgrades as much as me

 

(Mia)(Smiles)

and your quite handsome yourself

 

(Jin)

Can I offer you a drink,

 

(Mia)

Yes please,

(Jin Drugs her drink)

(takes Mia to head office of icore international)

 

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

Thank you for bringing her in plug her in to our main switch board its time I give her the full package it is dangerous I know but for the hope of all mankind we do not have a choice this will give her full power in the Entrical system and control of our fate we need a hero I hope this works

(Commander chief Wilson)

She survived

 

(Mia)

How did I get here

 

You were picked up by jin he means you we mean you no harm

(Mia)

 

I feel different we gave you an upgrade

 

(Mia)

I feel good, I mean I feel great thx

What am I doing here

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

i have something to tell you

The AI that was built in the past was savage and ruthless and it stopped at nothing to find a way to solve its problems

 

(Commander chief Wilson)

in year 2148 we learnt how to build AI defense protocol 1, to combat the past mistakes

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

but it grew into a rage to fight the mess that we have made and is now on an up rise and will take everything away that we hold dear

 

(Commander chief Wilson)

 it is a deadly thing to be surrounded by 2 types of machinery that do not cooperate                      

protocol ones AI has tried everything and will kill for a way to get inside the mind of the former AI system and take control

(Dr. Fredaric)

There should be so much more to discover

 

(Commander chief Wilson)

our thought to be savior has stopped us from evolving

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

we have noticed that the defense protocol one ai chip has gone hey wires and will set off a chain reaction to bring down the former system and many of us cyborgs will not survive

 

(Commander chief Wilson)

We did not expect this outcome and 98% of the world population are cyborgs

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

And In less than 3 days protocol 1 will unleash he’s attempt to take out the older generations AI components and all cyborgs will all be dead

 

(Commander chief Wilson)

But you Mia you are of perfect design your balance is of perfect love and power you are of new design to make life as AI and you will take over control of defense protocol one

And destroy it

And with our help you can take down defense protocol 1 it doesn’t stand a chance

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

Will you help us bring down defense protocol one and save the world

 

(Mia)

Ill do it!

 

(Commander chief Wilson)

it is now the time to save the world free

 

 

 

(mia is in a deap sleep and plaug into the Entrical system)

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

Its time start the operation everything that will be done will be in the world’s best intrest

 

(Commander chief Wilson)

we will have desolate Mia’s mind for it to be 100% success

she is kind and just her mind will be perfect for our new world I hope our plan works

 

 

(Dr. Fredaric Starts the operation)

 

(Commander chief Wilson)

How are things proceding

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

As planed

 

(Commander chief Wilson)

This will work I know it is, whats going on

 

(Dr. Fredaric seals operation room)

(Dr. Fredaric)

I have left her mind on she will not be part of your design

(Commander chief Wilson)

You fool you have killed us all

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

She should of have had the choice we should of not deceived her

 

(Mia)

Whats going on why am I still here aint I suposet to be in the Entrical system

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

You are safe come with me

 

(Dr. Fredaric Releases Mia her from straps)

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

Now you will be safe

(Dr. Fredaric is stabed in the back by Commander chief Wilson)

 

(Mia)

What’s going on

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

your not as if you should be, your mind was supposed to be deleted you would of  turned into a machine and your life will be lost

 

(Commander chief Wilson)

Fredaric you have ruined us all, we havent got much longer to save our world its only a matter of days and we will all be dead

Plug yourself in Mia take on the protocol 1 you need to it’s our only way to survive

 

(Dr. Fredaric)

Stop it will kill you,

 

(Mia)

With my Faith i will make a stand

For the benefit of all mankind I will do this for you

 

 

 

(Mia Plugs herself in)

turn on the desolater the time to act is now

 

(a Blue Pulse running trough Entrical system)

(Mia’s Eye’s glow blue)

 

The world will now a better place

… … .. . . . (dyeing noise)

 

(Mia)

Prototype one you will not succeed for I am the chosen one and what you are doing is wrong I am going to turn you into nothing and send you into oblivion

 

(Prototype one)

You will not be worthy I know of this and you will fall by my hand

the best way to stop fate is to change the way you think I will turn your mind to mush

….. you are infumlabuable how are you resting me,

(Mia)

You take life away, I am here to save it!

 

(Mia Fights punches thrown sword drawn, pulses of fire coming out Mia and Mia stabs prototype one and puts prototype one activity to rest)

(Commander chief Wilson)

She did it now we have a savior, long live Mia!


As i felt myself die, I found that we are all in this together

 the inevitable fait someone would try this action was only on the account of true danger

For I am the all great ever growing eye

 Though I will never be alive again but i will never hurt you

For I am the chosen one and my essence will exist on

 

 

1 days later

(Thought of Mia’s)

Time travel is a deadly construct the alternate past that gave us the gift of tomorrow was a sad world I will dedicate my life to trying to save them but I will not put my world in danger that alternate time line was cold and dark world and even though I’m dead it still makes me cry

I will not make the same mistakes… so you will not hear this from me…

 But life should have its boundaries

 

(Mia)

It has been 400000000000000000000000000000000378 years since I lost my life and my vast empire has expanded across the universe and time my people populate most of all the habitable planets

I have spent countless years in the pursuit of saving the past I have not neglected those around me

But as time has gone by those around are expecting an impending war and I am not safe i don’t know what to do , and it’s only a matter of time for my essence will end and my people are stuck in a savage world, I don’t know what to do but how long can I wait

 

(Reecle)

it’s now or never we must stop Mia she is our only weakness we will take this world everything in it the world is ours the time is at hand join me brothers in her dermis

(Mia watching)

(Mia)

My time has almost come, it is to late I must do something

I have been working on a theory of an alternate dimension and I might be able to make 3 different alternate timelines but this is only a theory and will be a test

 

Its now or never I must start I have no choice or otherwise they will turn upon them self’s

I will make history or die in my course

It’s time

(Burts of light)

Woohop woohop wooohop

ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

 

I have done it I have,,, nooooo I haveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeve tooooooooooooo

 

(Mia)

In the year 2152 the world as we know is a prosper world you could have anything you want we live strong for we are cyborgs We have an Entrical that allows us to maintain a fake world system that allows us to live over dramatic life style with no fear of death and the best fights take place there they are safe and fun

we have come to complete realization there will be no more inventions but have we lost all hope finding anything new

 and sophisticated AI work night and day on newest technology to bring us hope there will always be more to come,

And cybernetics are at the top of their field and upgrades are all the rage what can I say we have everything

 

 

(Dova)

You getting any upgrade done

 

(Mia)

Only the latest icore protact affiances, all the stuff a healthy girl needs


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